Akira Nikaido of monochrome factror

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so any way my idea is;
Theres this boy named Rhyou who is never picked for any thing in sport and goes to school everyday without any friends
So he's getting ready for school and he realises that his little sister Brilla isnt going, he of course tells his mother that shes faking sick
But his mother says no she not and for him to go to school. After another bad day at school, Rhyou comes home to see his house burnt down to the ground
his parents are dead but Brilla is still alive, they get put into a foster home but Rhyou starts screwing up and running away so he and Brilla are sent to a boarding school.
Rhyou gets there and sits down next to a boy name Saske who tells him if he comes any closer he'll kill him.
Next to him on the other side is a boy name Leighcan who tells him that there gonna be the best of friends, and a girl named Zakura who immedialtly invites him into at least 20 diffrent sporting groups.
Also her twin sister called Miraa who is slightly shy and Rhyou thinks is pretty :3
Later on Saske realises that Rhyou has abilities (water) and invites him into their speacial "origami" club, there he realises that all the kids there (Kazuki, Miraa, Leighcan, Zakura, Saske) All have there own abiltites as well.
It also turns out that Brilla has lighting and after a while she accidently uses her fire, so Rhyou figures out that it was Brilla who killed there mother and father.
But Brilla isnt actually his sister, shes from an institute where children who have uncontrollabel powers are locked up, Rhyou was given a special injection that gave him false memories that Brilla was his sister.
Apparently the mother had always wanted a daughter so they got Brilla but when she became preagnat decicded to give her back because they couldnt handle her anymore and tried to give her an injection that would make her forget them and Rhyou. SO Brilla became so angry she torched down the house :)

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